“Long Trip”

He built and image that water is big and wide like a …

Similes: a desert filled with waves like the sea.

Gist: He is talking about the sea and how it’s a desert of water.

The sea is a desert of water. I like that line, because it says it’s a desert of water and I like that simile.

I like the poem.  It’s nice, because it’s about the sea.